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 Potency Conception: Viable Certainty Open in new Window. [E]
A powerful interlude - a worthy adjustment to the Great One’s gift - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is another great poem by the poet. There is no doubt about it. God is merciful to us forever. So he is always ready to give us a chance to rectify those errors. We should awake from our auras and utilize those chances gleefully.
Unfortunately, some people do not accept these opportunities. They invite their bad luck.
We should be positive-minded, and should not repeat the same mistake. That may give us heavenly stamina.
Undoubtedly it is excellent poetry. I hope your creativity will entertain us in future, too.


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