i found this piece on Read & Review and enjoyed it a lot. I can see why it was a Daily Cramp winner. Rachel is an engaging character. We can all relate to the 'bad morning blues' and the desire to join the circus.

I think the tone is just about perfect for the story and the ending works well. I didn't find any spelling or grammar issues. The only change I would suggest for the story is adding a circus-themed cover image.

I did find one nit for your consideration:



Keep writing!


Words Whirling 'Round

A poet merely pens a mirror, the reader brings the reflection.

                       

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