Great story! I loved that he was having those crazy dreams and I only clicked on it because of the title and the sub-heading 'Charon charges one obolos coin for each soul crossing the Styx'. It sounded like it would be about greek mythology, and I am crazy about greek gods, and demigods, so I could not help myself and went on it. I'm glad I did though. However, there were a few mistakes.
You should put some spaces when you go onto a paragraph. When he is wondering if it is all a dream, you put a semi-colon, which should have been a full stop. When he wakes for the second time, you put a comma, which should have been a semi-colon. Still, I liked it. Keep posting.

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