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 Eros & Psyche  [ASR]
A story I am writing about the classic greek mythical couple Eros and Psyche
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Review of Eros & Psyche  
Review by DragonPrince
Rated: ASR | (2.0)
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So I'm guessing that she got with Eros, which would make sense as it is called Eros and Psyche. I really liked it, but there were far too many mistakes. I liked the fact that she would be getting with a god, because that would be amazing. It was a great story line, but now I'll have to get to the things that were bad.
When you were speaking about the sisters hating Psyche, you had repeated 'they'. When you were saying that they mostly stare at her face, you said 'the' instead of 'they'. When you were saying that Aphrodite had been watching Psyche, you forgot to add a comma before her name. Also, you spelled 'Treacherous' wrong. If you go back through to edit it, I'll come back and give another review. Keep posting.

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