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 | Technology  [E] Poem about the future.  |
| (5.0)| Hallo! I visited your notebook to wish you a Happy WDC Anniversary, and came across this poem there. Knowing about your Happy Travels some years ago, I got curious how you'd write about technology. I must admit I was expecting you to highlight tech's 'miracles'. Instead, I found a very balanced viewpoint that sums up today's situation in effective rhyme and verse structure. You provide the arguments of both sides of the issue ... and end with what many readers will relate to, that it is a bit crazy. This seemingly simple poem provides great helpings of food for thought and nuggets of deep insight. Thank you! SUGGESTION: I have a small suggestion for the second verse. You use the word 'new' in both, the third and fourth line. Maybe look at changing one of these ... ? Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking poem! Write On!    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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