Hi,

I am reviewing these lines of prose for your WDC Account Anniversary.
Congratulations on this cheerful occasion.
Have a wonderful day!

You have described your love's face and features in an appealing manner.
Imagery is crystal clear because it is visual.
"His eyes are blue like sea when moonlight shines on the surface."

Great to know you have fulfilled your dream of love by finding the right person.

Here are a few edits if you like.

Your lines-

"when he kiss me I'am under his spell. When I look at his face i know no harm shall come for his love well protect me, because to me he is the face of love."

"when he kiss.."
(when he kisses...)
Third person singular verb in simple present tense, needs -es or -s, like he watches, she studies, he runs, she eats etc.


"I'am"
(I'm)
I'm is a contraction of "I am".


"i know no harm"
(I know no harm)
Capitalization of first person singular i.e. I, is compulsory, wherever you use it.



"his love well protect me,"
(his love will protect me)
or
(his love well protects me)


Hope you will find this review helpful.


Write on!












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