Very cool premise. Fairy Tail has a lot of fun characters so it is a good anime to chose to write about. Swapping is a fun concept as it is interesting to see characters take on different roles. There are a nice variety of swaps suggested to give the story some range. All of them offer some wild ideas. I like the idea of a life swap. It seems like a fresh concept that has not been done before
This interactive is just starting out so it has a lot of growing to do. I hope you continue to develop it with other authors. It seems to be developing nicely though with chapter 7 (the latest at the time I was reading this) setting up the first storyline nicely.
One quick editing recommendation:
In the title description it seems like there's a slight spelling error. -> boardm -> board
Other than that... keep up the great writing and best of luck with this story.
(Note I Re-reviewed to set it as a public sorry about the double e-mail.^_^; )
You responded to this review 03/02/2024 @ 7:51pm EST
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