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 Yugioh the start  [E]
This story about a new student in yugioh to yugioh zexal if u want?
by otonman
Review of Yugioh the start  
Review by KingsSideCastle
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a good interactive. I love Yugi-oh so its a fun idea. The series has a great fantasy world. It was a smart move to divide up your story by seasons. The chapters available are also very well developed and written out. It makes the reader feel like they are part of the Yugi-oh world. I give a lot of credit to you for actively working to make your interactive grow and add a ton of additions to your story. A lot of interactive owners neglect to add to

I hope you eventually add arcs from the last season. That was the most exciting one for me when Bakura traps them in Ancient Egypt. It would make for a really exciting storyline.

One thing I strongly recommend is when adding new choices to title the chapter. Don't just leave the default continue choice as a title. It is much easier to navigate the story outline if people can see what title they are navigating to.

Anyway... really great work with this interactive and I hope it continues to develop and grow.

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