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I found this non-fiction piece on Read & Review. The author gives a brief account of the Baha'i Faith coming to America. The information is interesting and presented clearly. I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, but I would suggest a larger font.

I think this piece would benefit from another paragraph (or maybe three) to give the reader a sense of why this historical event is so important to the author. What impact does it have on their life. Also, I think The Prayer for America should be included instead of merely being referenced. As a daily practice, it should be given more emphasis to help the reader better understand Baha'i.

And here's a nit for your consideration:



Keep writing!


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