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 decievement Open in new Window. [E]
my first piece of poetry. nov. 09, 2021
by aleksandr komarov Author Icon
Review of decievement  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It's good to see you on WdC; welcome.

Nonsense perhaps, but maybe a bit more truth in some cases.

Reading your nonsense was a bit bumpy, but because of the genre list at the pot left of the page, I was able to understand your intent to a degree. I wonder what prompted this nonsense and how much is actually nonsense versus some truth of the matter. It's a crazy world these days. Your poem just might reflect some of the craziness, true?

For genres, other is nondescript and in order to be found easier, you should consider something like mystery because your poem is a bit of a mystery, or suspense because it does in a way cause a suspenseful feeling while the reader is considering the purpose and meaning of your poem, or some other genre that even though it may be a bit of a stretch still would fit a category of some genre or other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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