Your story can be a tear-filled reading experience except although they had a great loss of a loved one, that loved one communicates with them and is probably watching over them. I'm sure they felt emptiness and grief but still, somehow sometimes the feeling of a loved one nearby is possible.

I wonder what happened before this loss of a loved one, what happened days, months, or years later? This story could be expanded.

It could tell more about who these people are and show how they reacted when the mother died.

{c:I wonder what the wife/mother was like?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .