An adorable little story taking three common housecleaning objects and personifying them as they go about their work. I thought it was charming and fun.

I noticed some grammar errors in these sentences:
• "as to where to find the lair of Dustbunny was." There's an extra word there, you can decide which one
• "once again in the closet of preparation for the nigh,t" a simple typo and perhaps a change of words is required here.
• "Frufrubottom's, surprise and terrified delight, dust, and cobwebs covered..." Too many commas here.

This was a great story, I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing



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