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 The Ride of the Three.  Open in new Window. [E]
Mrs Frufrubottom, Rumba, and Sloppy patrol
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is delightful. I've had some success with inanimate objects myself, and even written a poem of praise of their faithfulness, but nothing as all-encompassing as this. The names, so mysterious in your description of the piece, come to life and understanding one by one as we traipse (the only word for the way this beautiful piece flows to our minds) through Mrs. Frufrubottom's day. I love it.

To be honest, I can find no flaw in it and this doesn't help my quest at all. I'm supposed to offer suggestions for improvement to fill the requirements of the particular contest I'm involved in, but I can think of nothing. The darn thing is perfect. I can't even point at areas in the presentation that can be tweaked. In the end, I'm going to have to do this one as contest-unrelated, since there's no way I'm passing it by without applause.

May I congratulate you on an excellent piece of work?

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