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Review #4710495
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 What It Means to be Family  [ASR]
A dialogue-only spoof on a family celebration.
by THANKFUL SONALI in Octo-BOO
Review by SandraLynn
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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I'm laughing! Nothing like a wee incentive, or is that an outright bribe to compel a family member to join a road trip and then possibly overeat chicken and waffles. That will be quite the significant distance to travel. I personally have driven much further to reach Florida. The dialogue in this story is believable. My only thought is that "road trip" need not be capitalized in the final line.Haha, ordering a dog to gather its essentials and prepare for a car trip. Thanks for putting a smile on my face.
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