Let me start by pointing out my two favorite statements:

1."[writing] can change so many life of people."
2. ". . . writing will surely take the reader everywhere."

Writing is a powerful tool, capable of transforming people's lives. It transcends time, distance, culture, and differences. It can be used to educate, inspire, teach, entertain, and more. Words on a page can start a revolution or a movement. They can also spark empathy and heal a broken heart . . . I could go on, but the point has been made. Writing changes people's lives, and I, being passionate about it, agree with and love your statement!!!

2. ". . . writing will surely take the reader everywhere." Truer words were never spoken. Whether it be a song, a poem, an essay, a work of fiction, happy, sad . . . writing takes the reader everywhere! Fantastic point!

Suggestion: You have a strong message to share and I'm guessing that English is not your first language. Might you find someone to edit your writing so you can effectively continue to share your voice?

Suggestion: Your description does not seem to match your title. It sounds better suited to your introduction. May I suggest something like, A debate regarding the trivialness of writing.

What follows are a couple of suggestions for a more properly worded sentence:
Correction 1: Your sentence: "I wrote such introductory in order to share a glimpse of where I am coming from." Should read: I wrote such an introduction in order to share a glimpse of where I am coming from.

Correction 2: "So many people think of writing as a trivial thing to do while in fact it can change so many life of people" Should read: "So many people think of writing as a trivial thing to do while in fact it can change so many life the lives of so many people."

Finally, and in my personal opinion, writing is not trivial. It can, however, be a hobby, as a hobby is defined as "an activity done regularly in one's leisure time for pleasure." It is also defined as "an interest or activity to which a person devotes time for pleasure." Many people write for enjoyment and pleasure. . . as well as for a need to communicate, educate, inspire, entertain, etc.

Thank you for sharing your passionate piece. It added to my day. I hope that you will continue to share your message via the written word.

Live and write passionately,
Cyndee






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