Hi W.P. Gerace ;
Having tried my hand at this prompt I wanted to see how the winner handled it and you did it masterfully. I loved your story and how you worked in the details.

Being from Canada, I had to research the various places that were mentioned. I had fun, but it put a bit of a crick in my writing.

One suggestion I would make would be to break up the paragraphs a bit so that there is more white space. Paul's texts would do well on a line of their own - emphasizing his point. I like that they are in all caps. My EX wrote everything in all caps and did not understand when I was telling him he was 'yelling' at me whenever he did that.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .