I noticed you could add friendship, possibly drama, mystery because your poem doesn't explain why the friendship was broken, and many others that would help your poem to be found by the quills and WdC members.

The rhythm and story are a nice read. I was able to visualize and to an extent feel the actions and emotions of your poem story.

I like the way you put together the calling of the empty seats and not walking away. It made the issues of longing for friendship stand out. When I read the first line of this part of the poem it seemed a bit awkward and I had to read it again to have some understanding and the rhythm work well. I saw it as the seats calling you or as dang it! the seats are calling I guess it could possibly go either way.

I wonder why this relationship was not mended or rather what caused such a riff it could not be mended?

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