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 Work In Progress Giving You Difficulty   [13+]
Another blog entry from my GETTING UNSTUCK AND RE-IGNITING YOUR CREATIVE SPARK series.
by 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Disclaimer:

I may suggest changes in my review. This is not meant as 'serious' literary criticism (I’m no expert). It's merely my record of the ‘bumps’ I encounter as I travel through your words. If I'm thrown by a typo, an awkward word, or a line that doesn't scan, then it's likely that others will be as well. My intent in giving a review is to applaud your work and maybe help you to improve it. A review is merely another reference to consider. If the suggestions prove useful, then use them. If I ‘just don’t get it’, then by all means ignore me!


This is a good piece that provides practical advice for writers who may be feeling stuck or unmotivated. I whole-heartedly agree with what you've offered. The only thing I'd add is a mention that oxygen can stimulate the brain. Even moderate exercise, such as taking a walk, can make a real difference. I also picked a couple of nits, just for you! *Smile*

Here are some suggestions for your consideration:

Assess how your you're feeling

a smaller, bit-sized bite-sized finished piece

It It's all about getting to know yourself as a writer.

Sometimes those ‘need to do’ things can often get in the way of being creative.

If the writing it is not happening




Words Whirling 'Round

A poet merely pens a mirror, the reader brings the reflection.


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