Is his brother Keith Richard? The twist at the end is one reason that I love flash fiction. This one made me smile at the end.

I enjoyed the inclusion of some standard horror story phrases such as "dark and stormy night". The author keeps it light and slightly comedic while creating the traditional vampire story setting.

Suggestions : only one suggestion and that is regarding genre. I have oft been advised to pay more attention to what I choose to categorize my writings as. But your choices are showing up as "other" x 3. I am on my phone so if for some reason these are not the genres you chose but it's some malfunction of the website on my phone browser, I apologize. But if "other other, other"was really what you chose, then I have to suggest that you change it to perhaps horror or comedy or fantasy...

Overall impression: this is an amusing vampire tale with a twist and a nice use of the prompt.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .