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Given: Sep 4, 2023 at 3:16am
Length: 558 Characters |
558 w/o WritingML
"What if the Powerpuff Girls were adults?" This is an interesting idea, and one I do wish was actually made. Despite that, this is a good 'what if' with plenty of different options. I especially like how you allow us to follow the life of one, two, or all three Girls. However, I do what some suggestions.
Suggestion: One of the genres you have is 'other' which isn't a genre. I would suggest either "family" as they are sisters, or "erotic" due to the story itself. By change to either of the options I have given will help people find your story easier.
You responded to this review 09/04/2023 @ 3:20am EDT
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