Peace is a great idea and the characters' efforts to work toward this are believable but they are presented in a stilted and sterile manner. They seem to be a bit robotic because of the way the words are arranged, the sentence structure and the ideas are presented.

The plot is decent but it seems a bit stiff and strained because of the way the words and sentences are written. They are more like a matter of facts and not related to emotions or actions.

This story is much like the other story I reviewed earlier and this style is getting old very fast.

There is potential for this story and the other one if it has more humanity involved in showing the reader emotions, actions, and information about the scene and the environment.

Human insights and creativeness make a huge difference for me. I hope you add more humanity to your stories, please.

Thank you for writing [A.I] but human writing is better, and for sharing your word art such as it is with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .