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Given: Sep 3, 2023 at 9:59pm
Length: 711 Characters |
701 w/o WritingML
Well written, but not my cup of tea.
You moved the reader quickly and seamlessly through your story. As I started reading the third paragraph I paused and said to myself, I know where this is going . . . and it did go exactly where I thought it was going.
First suggestion: Give a warning as to the nature of your piece. Simply informing the reader that the piece is dark would suffice.
Suggestions #2: Add it to the dark genre, and perhaps the death genre, too. You'll get more exposure, and people who like this type of prose will more readily find it.
I dung you 1/2 a star because I feel strongly about warnings when the content is dark.
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