These seem to be random thoughts chained together by similar topics or at least having something slight in common.

Genres: other than "other" could be personal, drama, mystery--mystery of life-thoughts, adventure--thoughts on an adventure, or whatever else is even slightly related to what you write.

Sinking in the ocean, to me, may not exactly be a good reason for liking or loving the ocean. Are you referring to the buoyancy of the ocean, or is being jumbled something significant?

Your jumbled thoughts are nice and interesting, but you could expand this story by showing more of your reacions and feelings.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.



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