That was an excellent story. I don't know what else to say except that. I loved it! I have never read something so good. Still, there were a few mistakes, but I will get too that towards the end. Where to start. I was searching through the read and review, when I discovered this story, and seeing the genre and rating, I decided to read.
I did discover some mistakes that stood out, so this will be getting a four and a half star review because of that, but don't take it as me being rude. When you said 'lipgloss' instead of 'lip gloss'. when you said 'down-covered', it should've been 'down covered'. also instead of saying 'were', you said 'we're'. Apart from that it was good.

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