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Review #4710061
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 My Mom is Me Open in new Window. [E]
It is about my mom.
by Angelic Light Author Icon
Review of My Mom is Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Being the daughter you have a lot of your mother in you which I understand.
Your words flowed well and I was able to follow the story, and ideas, and get to know more about you and your mom.

What I didn't fully understand was when you wrote that you got married to keep your mother's memory. Did you not marry for any other reasons such as falling in love?

Feelings can bring a poetry story or any story into focus for the reader. How did you feel when you wrote this poem and how do you feel now? I hope you feel better and are thriving.

I can understand missing your mom because I miss my mom too.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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