The rhythm of your words are like a sweet song of love. They drew me forward and into your poem story. I was able to imagine the scene and feel the passion.

One important message you can incorporate into this poem is that even things get old, if taken care of they become precious antiques to be respected and cherished. This is so for people too, although they should be respected and cherished always.

Another aspect that could enhance this story is that there are different kinds or levels of love. Brotherly love or friendship love or love of country for example.

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