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Dream Wings Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about living your dreams, and not being too disappointed by failure.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on 'read and review' - and it was a good message for me to get today! There was very low attendance at my Harry Potter meet up and I had just made up my mind to hold on for a while yet, and then this poem re-inforced it! Thank you! *Smile*

The title, brief description and genres work. The message comes through in the free verse poem. I like the way you bring out that the negatives can evolve into positives and we can be ahead of where we were before the failure.

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My suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line-space, center, to enhance the look of the poem.

Thanks for sharing this poem!
Write On!
Thanks, Gervic and Falguni!
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