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 What Happens in Heaven, Stays in Heaven Open in new Window. [13+]
A humorous description of Heaven for a dying sister.
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is indeed a superb writing effort. There is no doubt about it. The narrator's sister is going to die. So, she has a fear of death in her heart. Therefore, the teller describes a humorous description of heaven as she can overcome the anxiety. Our heaven is a dreamland full of joy and happiness. Most interesting to read. But we can visualise unseen tears in the narrator's heart. There is no word sufficient consolation. Don't you feel the same?
It is an amazing writing. I hope your creativity will entertain us in future, too.
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