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 The Forbidden Library  [ASR]
A young scholar searches for ancient knowledge.
by Graham B.
Review by Kotaro
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Although, I thought the ending wasn’t clear, I enjoyed reading your story because I liked the main character, Gerhard. A seemingly foolish youth with a dream so dear that he disregarded the dangers of achieving it.

Too bad you were limited to 2000 words in the contest.

So, my take on the ending was he gained knowledge from the library. How?
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