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Review #4709721
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 Dogs at the Mall Open in new Window. [E]
a day at the mall with Grandma is not what you might expect
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author Icon
Review of Dogs at the Mall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello ridinghood Happy 23rd WDC Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" Open in new Window. [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with. *Smile*


*Reading* This is a cute poem that had me smiling throughout!

*Balloon2* Title and Description - Fabulous title that drew me in, and the description made me want to read on. *Smile*

*Penr* Theme/Subject Matter:- I'm a dog lover, and since the poem is about my favorite furbaby, I had to read to see what happens. It's talking about all the purebreds the pet shop at the mall sells. And how they end up just going to the shelter and picking out a few fabulous mix breeds!

*Flower1* Characters - Are well written. It shows the tight-knit relationship between the two, and how their love of dogs binds them.

*Penb*Originality/Creativity:- A wonderful creative spin on picking out a new furbaby pet.

*Balloon4* Setting - Is done well by showing how the mall puts emphasis on only purebreds.

*Flower3*Emotion/Impact: - The poem made me smile and touched my heart. *Heart*

*Balloon4* My Suggestions - I only found one typo:

*Penp* Grams and I just laughed out load

Grams and I just laughed out loud

*Books2* down at the pound,

No comma needed after pound

*Penw* The salesclerk

The sales clerk

*Penv*My Favorite Part: -

We ended our day down at the pound,
and adopted two mutts and a plain old hound. *Bigsmile*

*Peng*Summary: I really enjoyed this little poem. Thank you for sharing your writing with us, and thank you for the smile.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

*Heart* Tracey

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