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 Review #4709667 |
 | Love is the Best Part  [E] "mean folks never earn..this...feeling...prideful people consider..Themselves too special"  |
| (5.0)| Hallo! This poem showed up on 'read and review' and I'm so glad it did. You speak a truth - that those who are arrogant or petty cannot know love in its depth, as they are blocking themselves from receiving it. I didn't quite understand what you meant by 'unsure', because if they are simply indecisive they can learn to love ... SUGGESTIONS: 1. I think I'd have liked to see a bit more! Like perhaps, the reasons why people become prideful or mean. Was it something that happened in their childhood that made them this way? Is it actually a deep feeling of insecurity that is masked by arrogance? Are they, therefore, to be pitied instead of blamed? 2. Also - a bit about the positive side, how humble, gracious people experience joy ... ? 3. My other suggestion is for the layout of the poem - maybe some WritingML like font, size, center. Thanks for sharing this poem! Please know that it works beautifully as it is, my suggestions are only because I want to read more! Write On!  
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