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 The note Open in new Window. [E]
A flash fiction piece about time.
by Eight-7 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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"The note" is a short tale of one who felt a heavy burden of shame: for all his lies, which he called "white lies", and for missing to visit "your grave". As I reviewed this work, I realized that the man carried a burden of "pain in this irony that I deserve"; that he realized how much he missed his wife; that "I've missed coming to see you since the stroke."

It is a sad story of one man who now realizes his enormous failure to love his wife.



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