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Nobody Likes You When You're 23 Open in new Window. [13+]
Interactive story to celebrate Writing.com's 23rd birthday.
by Grateful Jess Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a very practical story. Though it is tiny in size but makes a strong protest against jealousy. It is a burning issue in today's world.
Dale is going to celebrate his 23rd birthday on the beach. 16 years old Jane feels jealous of his best friend Dale. But who knows what is in Dale's mind! Jane was out of his list! A friend asks him about that but Dale has no answer.
We are surrounded by this pattern of mean-minded people. Psychologists are trying too hard to find the root of this kind of disorder. They do not achieve any success. We should remain away from these types of immoral activities.
It is a brilliant beginning. I hope that the setting momentum will be maintained in future.

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