A.I. stories seem to be like something on autopilot rather than a work of word art. This story is interesting, but the A. I. thing is foremost in my mind. How much of this story was written by you verses written by A.I.?

I would have liked to know a bit more about Elias and his inner feelings. How did he react to situations for example? Was he really seeking power for himself or was he seeking it for the benefit of everyone? It seems that he has a good heart with good intentions.

Adding more showing of reactions between Elias and his situations, responses between him and people, and betwseen him and the power would greatly enhance and bring this story to life. Would he feel better if this power were somehow destroyed?

The interesting part of this story is that the power can be whatever the person decides; used for good or for evil.

I am glad that Elias decided to return to his former self. I wonder how he felt after making this dicision?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .