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When I first came across this story, I did not read it, deciding that there was little point in reviewing something written by a machine. This second time, however, curiosity got the better of me and I read through the story.

It turns out to be simple but not obviously bad or error-ridden. And I realise now that much depends on what you input into the machine. How bare a skeleton did you provide, in other words? At a guess, I would say that you gave it a few words and told it to weave a story around them. In which case, it has supplied a fairly standard and uncomplicated plot with an obvious moral - power corrupts. It may be that it takes a human to devise the truly devious and original plot that makes for a great story.

At least, I hope so, or we writers are all doomed. That invention of the devil will work 24 hours a day without pay or vacations. We can't compete with that.

So, ultimately, my advice would have to be: Don't mess with those things!

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