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 How much is enough  Open in new Window. [E]
Daily tending to my plants and watering them, agonizing if they dry or wither.
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The idea of 'enough' is so important. This poem can be taken literally or seen as a metaphor for many aspects of our lives - personal and professional. How much work, how much play, how much love, how much advice ... how much anything is enough? And finally you state that it is the intention and the emotion that count. Beautifully done!

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My only suggestion is for the layout - you might like to use some WritingML like font, size, color, center and line-space, to enhance the look of the poem.

Thank you for sharing this poem!
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Thank you Kiya, for creating it, and Secret Squirrel, for gifting it to me!
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