Title and Description - Your title is perfect for this great play on words and drew my attention. Though, for your description, I think it sales your poem short. I'd change it to include what readers can expect. Something similar to 'A Comedic Look at a Drag-on's Dog Days of Summer. It may help draw more people in to read your piece.
Theme/Subject Matter:-Great subject matter for the play on words writing.
Characters - Nicely written. The reader easily gets to know the personality of the dragon they're reading about.
Originality/Creativity:- Very original and creative, funny piece.
Setting - Perfect setting for the writing. I was able to easily visualize each scene.
My Favorite Part: -The last three lines. Nice!
Summary: Thank you for the smile and chuckle. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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A Cute poem that made me chuckle. 
Title and Description - Your title is perfect for this great play on words and drew my attention. Though, for your description, I think it sales your poem short. I'd change it to include what readers can expect. Something similar to 'A Comedic Look at a Drag-on's Dog Days of Summer. It may help draw more people in to read your piece.
Theme/Subject Matter:-Great subject matter for the play on words writing.
Characters - Nicely written. The reader easily gets to know the personality of the dragon they're reading about. 
Originality/Creativity:- Very original and creative, funny piece.
Setting - Perfect setting for the writing. I was able to easily visualize each scene.
My Favorite Part: -The last three lines. Nice!
Summary: Thank you for the smile and chuckle. I enjoyed reading your poem.
KEEP ON WRITING ON! 
Tracey
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You responded to this review 08/25/2023 @ 2:11pm EDT