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Review #4704076
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Jots and Tittles and other Random Things Open in new Window. [13+]
Just things that I think about now and then.
by AmyJo-Thankful in heart Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Expression Within 40 Words - Lesson - for 7/15/2023 - WC-35Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, AmyJo-Thankful in heart Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Jots and Tittles and other Random ThingsOpen in new Window. "Expression Within 40 Words - Lesson - for 7/15/2023 - WC-35Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The poem teaches a lesson and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, and the narrative gives the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the lesson this poem teaches.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the lesson it teaches.

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