First Impression: The poem teaches a lesson and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, and the narrative gives the reader something to think about.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: I like the lesson this poem teaches.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the lesson it teaches.
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