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 Natasha & Naomi: Girl's Night Out Open in new Window. [13+]
The fifth entry. Naomi's friends treat her to dinner. Though, Naomi is very hungry...
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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In this chapter, Natasha remains absent. Naomi is the central attraction. She went to a restaurant with Ruth and Taylor to take the dinner. Naomi is very hungry. But she controlled herself well. At last, he took the challenge of Big Larry and became the winner.
The description is exciting and entertaining. It is written superbly.
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