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 Like Long Ago Open in new Window. [13+]
A baseball story... of sorts. (Part 1)
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Review of Like Long Ago  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The narrator of this story loves the excitement. Why should he not? In reality, he had played baseball since childhood. His favourite player was the great Johnny Bench, the most exciting player of the 70es. Records run behind that player. So, now the teller likes the Ebay site due to the excitement of the site. Anybody who enters a fast-paced life can never re-settle in slow-paced life again. That has been the central idea of part one.
It is an excellent writing effort. I hope your creativity will maintain forever.
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