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This poem describes many things, but to me, it describes the yearning to be whole again.
by Elizabeth Mavis Green Author Icon
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Hello there! I just saw your poem. I had to come by for a little visit. You have a way with words and I would have to agree you do describe the yearning to be whole again! You left me wanting more and that is a good thing indeed. I like the way your poem makes me feel and yet it is hard to put into words. I like every line and the way that it flows and I do not see any errors. A five-star for sure. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

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