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 The rained wish Open in new Window. [18+]
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Review of The rained wish  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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This is a poem of real love. The narrator has a lover. He is a patient person. The time is not favourable for them. Despite adverse situations, he does not lose his calmness. So, that person waits for the appropriate opportunity.
Time is passing away rapidly. But he keeps his patience. He is taking responsibility and transforming his lover's destiny. So how can he make a hurry and spoil all possibilities?
It is a fantastic lesson for us.
A classic beginning. Keep writing.

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