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 My First Prompt Open in new Window. [E]
Writing Prompt: Write a story that includes the line “We’re just too different.”
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Review of My First Prompt  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a thoroughly different piece of writing effort. It is the writer's first prompt to be written. So an emotion should be attached there. It is about a love affair. The narrator loves a lady too much. But she does not care about it. It is unfortunate but the reality. Therefore, the relationship does not prosper. That is explained beautifully.
It is a brilliant beginning. Keep writing.
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