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 Down the rabbit hole.   [13+]
How stress makes me feel.
by NayNizzy.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a very realistic poem. Through this poem, the poet sends a crucial message to us. We often run behind that targets do not have any need for us. But we try to achieve those targets wholeheartedly due to our greediness.
If we are not fit for that goal, the worst possible dangers may appear and take our life, too. Despite that, we can not control our last. It will nothing gives us expect a lot of frustration.
It is an excellent poem. Write on!

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