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 Ghost Open in new Window. [E]
invisibility is sometimes better
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This one showed up on Random Reads.
I love the message you give - and I appreciate what you did with the prompt. (Thanks for the note at the end!)

You've created an empathetic character in a few short verses. I could totally get his feelings and went through the ups and downs with him. The message that sometimes what we already have is what we're better off with comes through loud and clear.

SUGGESTION
Just a small one.
The word 'woodwork' doesn't need a plural I think.

Thanks for sharing this!
Write On!
Sonali

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