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 Conspiracies Abound Open in new Window. [13+]
An essay about my reaction to a Vigilant Citizen article. Knowledge is Power entry.
by Jeff Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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         This is a decently researched and written essay. And I don't feel bad about recommending it for a read. Sound logic and reason are on display here, and the arc of the principled research reaches throughout the essay.
         While I thought the essay was overall well framed, I do think that it is a little disingenuous to describe "Pizzagate" as a "tragedy" when no one died or was injured. The use of titles of unread articles to dismiss the current article being discussed also assumes facts not in evidence (though I think the other articles are titled ridiculously). Additionally, the sin of guilty by association is invoked, and I have genuinely run out of time for such accusations. It is such a shame because I do agree with the rest of the essay, and the closing paragraph is spot on.
         I did spot one word doubling:
"When two sources seem to offer different accounts or interpretations of of historical events[...]"

         A good read despite the flaws present, and I recommend it as an example of reasoning.
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