I liked the flow of the poem, though the inconsistent rhyming made the first read a little clunky to me. The emotional gut punch at the end, I thought, was well delivered. The cheater's lies and gaslighting are cut to pieces by the raw hurt felt. An easy recommendation from me. Memento Mori, KS ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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