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 Liar's Deathbed  [13+]
Joe worked hard all his life for his family, but a secret would erase any memory of this.
by RadioShea
Review of Liar's Deathbed  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is an excellent micro-story. Joe worked hard entirely of his life for his own family. His wife also felt proud of him. As a whole, Joe's family was indeed a happy family but a secret, the relationship between him and Christine, made the blunder. Therefore, his wife, Sue, started to behave roughly. Even before his premature death, she did her duties as a machine did, but not from the heart. Sue would not erase any memory of this. Even the smallest fault can spoil your life. So, be careful. Write on!
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