First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of frustration forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the way this poem shows how the news causes depression and frustration in people.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its comments about the news.
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