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Briefly Open in new Window. [E]
time will tell... right?
by Happy30s Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo,
This one showed up on 'read and review'.

The title, brief description, cover picture and genres work.

The poem itself is very relatable and tells a great truth. So often, for so many aspects of our lives, we put it off 'briefly' and find this has turned to 'no more'. You've brought this out in a few well chosen words. Well done! *Thumbsupr*

SUGGESTIONS:
1. WritingML - Font, size, center, linespace and maybe colour.
2. The phrase 'Those who link'.
This confused me a bit. Do you mean the gaps - the moments ... years? If so, is it the gaps that are fooled? Or the people? The gaps are absolutes, they're not expecting anything. It's the people who are being fooled, right?

Overall, a very relatable verse!
Thanks for sharing!
Write On!
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